Monday, September 28, 2009

Week #4 9/25/2009 Intro 1 of cause essay

Every year, without exception, on the third weekend of September, I walk into my garden with an itinerary quite different from that which was on mind only five months earlier. In one hand, I have the keys to the shed, work gloves, and a 10-gallon joint compound bucket holding 5- pound twine, newly sharpened clippers, a trowel, and a pink foam knee rest. In the other hand, I carry a galvanized watering can that once belonged to my Father-in-law.

1 comment:

  1. Nice start to a 'real' essay but for a five graf essay, the student needs to make clear that reasons for something will be analyzed in the course of the next few grafs: the classic, sometimes somewhat mechanical plan of development.

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