Monday, October 5, 2009

Week 4 Graph # 8

Reaction to some of the cause sample essays

It was very helpful to have each paragraph broken down: intro, first support paragraph, second, third, and the outro, and suggestions as to what each one should do. What to put into each one. I see the logic and a pattern. When I read the sample essays, I looked for the key words and patterns . I paid particular attention as to how the author developed each paragraph. I looked for the plan of development you mentioned. The subject matter in each was especially interesting. I enjoyed the stories in each one too.


  1. Glad they helped--impressive the care you gave them.

  2. You had the hard job-compiling them together. My job was the easy part-reading and enjoying them. Thank you for all the time you put into this online class. I think I speak for all of us taking this class.